Monday, April 4, 2011

Editing for my Sooki~♥



I walked into the ally, I was back on earth. I held my cell phone in my hand, I had a text from Rex.


I waited in the freezing cold, I could even see my breath. I shoved my hands in my pockets and waited.


"Sooki." Someone called my name. I turned around looking to see my boyfriend, but instead I saw Joey, he had Rex's cell phone in his hands.


"J-Joey, what are you doing here?" I whispered.


"I texted you telling you to meet me here, there something I didn't get to finish a few years ago."


He walked up to me and shoved me into the brick wall behind us. I lost all the breath I had in me.


He pulled out a pocket knife and put it to my throat. I kicked him in the stomach and tried to run away, but he was able to grab the hood of my jacket and he threw me to the ground, I hit my head on the concrete, I could feel blood start to drip slowly from my head. Everything got fuzzy and foggy. He pulled at my shirt and cut it open. He pulled a sharpie from his back pocket and started making lines across my waist and chest.


"W-what are those lines for?" I mumbled in fear.


"To mark where I have to cut you. And this last one," He made a mark between my breasts." Will be where I cut out your heart, and I take it, because it will always belong to me, like you promised."


He took the knife to my waist and cut across the line, I groaned in pain, I couldn't take it. I took a deep breath. I could feel the blood drip from my stomach.


"Joey," I mumbled "Please just kill me first, if you have any compassion at all."


He looked at me and sighed "Fine." He put the knife to my throat and pressed it to my skin. I could feel the blade cut threw my vocal cord. The last thing I thought of was Rex. I could see everything, when I met him, the anger in his eyes when Meiko said I would be great with Miku in the Dark Wood Circus, his warmth when we slept in the cave together, our first kiss, when I told him I loved him, when he asked me to marry him. Even the day he let me sleep in his bed with him. I whispered slightly "I love you Rex." Everything went black.


I awoke to find myself in a black room, white mist everywhere.


"Sooki Tice Katastrophe." A cute voice said. I turned around to see a man in a black coat standing behind me.


"Who are you?"


"I am one of many grim reapers, and I am here to offer you a choice, either you can die and go to heaven, or you could become a grim reaper like me, never die, harvest the souls of the living, and in return you may live back on earth, or where ever you want."


I looked at him. "Well I'll take that then."


He grinned. "Come with me then dear."


-------------------BACK ON EARTH-------------------


The undertaker sewed Sooki's body up, Joey did a darn good job on her. He slowly dressed her in the white gown she was meant to wear, and he applied the makeup onto her face, he had known Sooki since she was born, so this was hard for him to do. He put her in the casket and sent her to the funeral.


People from all around sat in the chairs, cried in tissues, and kisses Sooki goodbye.


The person this was hardest on was Rex, though he showed no emotion, his normally, blue/gray eyes were hazel, meaning he was sad. His beloved fiancé, was dead. They'd been together so long, and he hadn't gotten the chance to say goodbye.


As soon as the funeral began, there was a strange sound.


It started out as a humming, all the people in tears looked up from there handkerchiefs and stared in awe at the glowing that came from Sooki's casket. Her brother Roku stood and walked to the death bed. He looked in and gasped. He reached his hand into the casket and lifted someone up. She stood. She was un-humanly thin and pale. She had thick purple rings under her eyes. Her white dress exposed where her wings had been torn from her back. Her beloved rose as well. He slowly walked towards the girl and held her in his arms. "Sooki, your back." She smiled and whispered back. "Yes, I am."


The people cheered and cried tears of joy as the girl walked to her family and said hello again.


----------SOOKI'S POINT OF VIEW-------


I looked at my arms, so white, so thin. I didn't feel like me.


That's it, I had to start a new beginning. I walked to the bathroom and pulled a pair of scissors from the cabinet. I grabbed a long lock of my hair and cut, I did this over and over, until there was a new me. Short and choppy, my hair went to my shoulders and there was a little flip.


I needed revenge. Joey didn't deserve to live. I walked to the bed. There was a box that younger reaper had given to me. I never even bothered to look at what was inside it. Inside was a small necklace with a small reaper scythe pendent on it. The note told me that the pendent was my scythe, all I needed to do was take it off the chain, and then it would grow larger.


I put red lipstick on as well as a pair of sunglasses and walked to Joey's home.


His parent's car was gone, but his was there. I pulled the scythe off the chain and it grew into a full size scythe. Being a reaper meant I was strong, strong enough to kick a door down, so I did.


I walked through the halls, there was still a dent from where he banged my head into the wall.


I opened his bedroom door. The light in the room was off, and he was asleep.


I poked him and he awoke startled.


"S-SOOKI?!" he screamed in fear.


"Yes sir. . . I'm back, and don't ask how it is possible, you find out soon."


I pulled him from the bed and threw him to the ground.


"Joey Markus Melerna. . . I'm Sooki, a grim reaper, and I believe, your time. . . is up." I raised the scythe. I trusted it down and his body turned to dust.


Suddenly millions of film strips flew from where his body was.


They had moments of his life on them. Most of them showed him with me and him in the thoughts. He loved me, he truly did, but I didn't let it bother me.


I walked out of his house and back to the hotel I was staying at, packed my stuff, and went home to No Where.


Rex awaited my return. As soon as I saw him I dropped my bags and ran into his arms. I pressed my lips to his. It was too long since I had done that. I pulled back and grabbed him by the collar of his shirt and dragged him inside. We walked into our room. I pushed him onto the bed, and climbed on top of him. I slowly pulled his shirt over his head. I could feel him smile. My hands had a mind of their own, I guess because they ran them self's over his chest and down to his belt. They hooked them self into his belt loops. He wrapped him arms around my waist and pulled me down on top of him more. I could feel every part of his body pressing against mine. . . I could feel his hands undoing my belt. . . and everything is history. . . For now.




I edited this for my special Sooki~!♥ She wrote the death and 'rebirth' of her character, Sooki. Rex will be very happy about the end, trust me~

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